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with the female remains safely in the hands of the new
albany forensic department for autopsy and identification,, and the crime scene
investigative team firmly in place,, gil and his new partner, detective jimmy dolan,
decided to head back to the precinct and get the paperwork out of the way while
they waited on what they hoped would be a swift positive ID so they could
proceed on the current 'jane doe' case..
“throw me the keys.” gil said to jimmy as they approached
the crown vic.. “nothin’ personal, i just wanna gab something to eat on the way
back and i’d rather drive then have to explain to you where were going.. hey
you like chinese??”
“hell yeah!” jimmy responded as he smiled back at gil and
tossed him the keys.. “and hey,, no offense taken..”
“i know this great little place.. it’s in china town,, but
kind of off the beaten path.. caters mostly to those of the asian persuasion,,
so you know the food is authentic.. not
your run of the mill americanized chinese..” gil informed jimmy as he wheeled
the crown vic through the maze of official police vehicles and awestruck
onlookers that riddled the parking lot surrounding the dumpster in which the pieces parts of the body had been found..
“sounds good.” jimmy replied without looking up from the
keyboard of his cell phone,, where he was already busily texting away..
“that’s one thing i just can’t get comfortable with.” gil
stated as he looked on in amazement as jimmy’s thumb tapped wickedly at the
keypad..
“huh?? what??” jimmy asked, still too engrossed in whatever
it was he was typing to look up..
“texting.. i don’t know how you guys do it.. i’ve tried,,
but my thumbs are too damn big,, so i end up typing it in with one finger,, and
then that fucking auto-correct thing steps in and… nope.. just not for me..”
“well just turn the auto-correct off.” said jimmy as he
finally took his eyes off his phone and looked eagerly at gil, as if something he had said had really piqued his interest..
“shit!!” exclaimed gil, as he shook his head 'no' and broke
out in what could easily have been interpreted as an embarrassed smile. “i’m
lucky i know how to retrieve my messages!! i been lost ever since the
department issued us these crazy smart phones.. way too much technology for
me!!”
“are you serious??” jimmy smiled back.. “dude! toss me your
phone.. i’ll turn it off for you.. take me all of two seconds..”
“so what?” gil inquired as he reached into his breast pocket
and grabbed his phone. “you like one of those techno geeks or something??”
“well i don’t know that i officially qualify as a geek, but
yeah, i like it and i guess you could say i am pretty good at it..” jimmy
nodded,, as gil unlocked his phone and handed to him..
a couple of quick taps later, jimmy handed the phone back to
gil.
“all set.. and hey,, about that texting thing,, looks like
you’re gonna have to start figuring it out.. you got a text in there from
someone named tori.. that wouldn't happen to be that hot little mess we just left back at your place, would it??” jimmy chided him, as he watched a bit of rose color rising in gil’s
ordinarily olive complexion..
“sure as hell is!!” gil exclaimed.. “and hot mess ain’t
nothing’ compared to that!! whew, lemme tell ya!!”
“so yeah, go ahead!” jimmy laughed, as he watched a sly
little grin join the boyish blush in gil’s cheeks..
“you know you wanna!!”
“holy shit!” gil said in a reflective tone, as if last night’s
antics were playing out in sexy little scenarios dancing through his
stream of consciousness..
“what the fuck was that?” jimmy barked as his demeanor
changed from fun loving tech geek to
homicide detective almost instantaneously..
“what was what?”
“that crowd!! didn’t ya see that huge crowd of people packed
into that alley way??” jimmy inquired with a tone of urgency..
“we need to turn
around.”
gil hung a quick left, on what just happened to be on the same
street he was headed for.. as he cleared the corner, all you could see was people. the street was a crushing throng of people.. there
was no doubt this was in some way connected to the crowd jimmy had just seen in the alley..
“jesus christ!!” gil exclaimed, as he quickly swung into the
left lane and double parked,, the car facing in the wrong direction.. jimmy was already on the radio to
dispatch..
“we got back up on its way..” jimmy informed gil as they
hastened toward the crowd, badges securely in hand..
***
while hank was failing miserably at his most genial attempt
at shooting the proverbial shit with buzz,, detective marisa wells, disappeared
outside the drawn privacy curtain to take an urgent call from dispatch..
“detective!” she barked as she yanked back the drape,, putting
an abrupt end to the painfully strained conversation that was going on at
buzz’s bedside..
both buzz and hank jumped to attention when they heard the
no nonsense tone of her voice..
“we got six bodies in china town..”
“holy fuck!!” hank exclaimed as he pushed past her and
headed for the elevator,, without so much as nod in buzz’s direction..
marisa stepped it up a bit,, and caught up with hank at the elevator,,
where he was repeatedly banging the down button for the elevator..
“whadda we got??” he asked impatiently.
“three adults, three children, execution style in the
apartment over tsang’s chinese
restaurant.. bettancourt and dolan already on the scene.. looks like when the
restaurant failed to open up on time today, a neighboring business owner went up
to check it out.. door was ajar,, the rest is still up in the air..” marisa
clicked off the facts,, stopping short when the elevator doors opened..
before the elevator even had a chance to begin its descent,,
hank was on the phone..
“bettencourt!!” he barked loudly into his phone, causing the civilian
occupants in the elevator to take a quick step back, “wadda ya got??”
“six down.. it’s tsung, the restaurant owner,, what appears to be his whole
family,, and some 20 something asain female identified by the locals as, uhm..” gil paused a
moment as he paged through his already extensive notes.. “a tiffany yoo..
father owns some swanky jewelry store here in china town,, you know the one,,
the suspected fence nothing ever seems to stick to..”
“got it.” hank retorted quickly as he slapped the blue light
on the roof of the car,, and blasted out into traffic..
“this place is crawling with people.” gil continued.. “we got
uniforms on crowd control,, but this place is a fucking zoo!!”
“where do you want us?” hank asked gil, as marisa slapped
her hand against the dashboard in defensive motion, evidently anticipating an impending crash as hank
slammed the gas and took off, flying up the wrong side of the street in order to
get around standing traffic..
“hit the jewelry store will ya?? grab yoo.. tell him we need him for identification
purposes or something.. maybe we’ll get lucky and get a nice mob collar outta
this thing..”
something about gil telling him what to do,, even though he
knew he asked for it,, didn’t sit right with hank..
‘fuck yoo!!’ he thought to
himself. ‘i’m the senior homicide detective and he’s got me running down family
members?? what the fuck??’
without so much as an affirmative, hank slid his finger across the screen on his phone,, thereby silencing gil, and made a totally illegal u-turn heading back the three blocks
that stood between him and yoo’s fine jewelry…..
even though marisa wells hadn't known hank bowers all that long,, she could tell- he was pissed...
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