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buzz was fresh out of the marine corp the first time he had laid
eyes on jeannie.
she had been majoring in criminal justice at the local
campus of bainberry college. her dream had always been to continue on to law
school,, and then join the public defender’s office upon completion her law
degree..
a quiet, studious girl,, her professors had little doubt that
she had chosen the wrong profession.. coming from an upper middle class family,
and having virtually no firsthand knowledge of what life in the streets entailed, it was their
general consensus that jeannie displayed
none of the qualities that would suggest she could ever become a successful litigator,,
let alone have the where with all to deal with the criminal element she sought
to defend.. basically they agreed,, that ‘the usual suspects’ would chew her up
and spit her out..
it was upon the suggestion of her forensic science
professor,, mr. adamkeiwitz,, that she decided to take the 12 week civilian
police academy course.. though the course offered no compensation, or college credits,,
mr. A had suggested that she get her feet wet with law enforcement,, get a
realistic view of exactly who she was going to be called upon to defend,, and
gain a better understanding of the process through which the criminal element became part of ‘the system’.. secretly he had
wished it would cause her to rethink her chosen field,, and not waste any more
time on a degree, that in his opinion, would never serve her well..
much to his surprise, jeannie flourished during the 12 weeks
she spent interacting with homicide detectives, robbery investigators, crime
scene investigators, and the undercover deputies working dangerous narcotics
investigations. so intrigued was she by the aspect of actual criminal
investigations that she applied,, and was accepted into a student intern
position with the new albany police department.
much to her chagrin,, she was assigned to a position in the
admittance office of the local police academy.. it had been her hopes to work
hands on with the seasoned detectives that had volunteered their time to instruct
the classes at the civilian police academy course she had so enjoyed..
instead,, she would be interacting with fresh young recruits,, with no real
street experience at all..
never one to make waves, jeannie decided to put her all into
her assigned position,, in hopes that her exemplary performance would make it
possible for her to, in time, request a transfer to a more challenging position..
her first assignment
was that of receptionist in the front office.. it quickly became evident
to her that in this position she was called upon to interact with,, not only the
fresh young recruits, but more importantly the veteran staff of instructors..
while she quickly became knowledgeable and efficient in
directing the activities of the young recruits,, she thrived on the one on one
interactions with the instructors,, all of which had abundant street
experience,, and were only too accommodating when she entreated them to fill
her ever eager mind with their on the job ‘war stories’..
so enthralled was she with her new found source of vital information,,
she had taken to cataloging the stories,, chronicling them in notebooks
according to the nature of the crime, during the free moments she could steal
away from her duties at the reception desk..
it was during one such journaling session,, that she was
called out of the vast storehouse of her thought process, by an voice that
carried with it a very authoritative tone.
“if i might interrupt you ma’am.”
jeannie looked up to find a fresh faced recruit who’s keen
good looks, combined with his high and tight military cut,, commanded the
respect his tone of voice had implied.
“absolutely!, i am sorry to keep you waiting recruit, what
can i do for you?” jeannie responded in
an appropriately professional manner,, although she felt a flush of excitement rush
over her,, and worried greatly that the blush in her cheeks would give as much
away to the brutally handsome recruit that stood before her..
“i am expecting a letter of commendation from my marine
commander, a master sergeant james p. dumond, will you check today’s incoming mail,
ma’am.. i need it ASAP!” his plea for assistance,, sounded much more like a
direct order..
“certainly recruit.” jeannie answered in kind,, as she
jotted down the master sergeant’s name on the first available scrap of paper on
her desk.. “and your name is?”
“private william miller, ma’am!” the recruit barked,, as he
leaned in,, placed his elbow leisurely on counter above the reception desk,, looked deep into her eyes,, and purred (in what could not be mistaken for anything
but a sultry, seductive tone) “but you can just call me buzz..”
if there had been any question that the blush in her cheeks
had given away her delight in being face to face with this handsome young
recruit,, it had been instantly erased.. jeannie could feel the flush
intensify,, and a cold sweat begin to break out over her brow,, extending itself down
the length of her nose.. she hurriedly swiped at the glistening beads of sweat
as she quickly turned away from the overtly flirtatious recruit in hopes that he
wouldn’t notice.. as she made her way into the adjoining mail room,, she stammered
back over her shoulder, “ok, i mean, um… i’ll be right back.”
in the weeks to come, jeannie became more and more entranced
with the provocative recruit she had come to call buzz when no one in authority
was around to hear her.. her flights of fancy quickly overtook any desire she
may have had of chronicling the ‘war stories’ that had once consumed her..
so enthralled was she by her desire to spend her every
waking moment in the presence of her first ever, real infatuation,, she didn’t even put up a respectable fight,
when he led her firmly by the hand into the cheap motel room he had premeditatedly rented with every intent of stealing from her, not only her
virginity,, but her heart…
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as buzz lay there,, listening to the whoosh and beep of the
machines to which jeannie was connected,, he couldn’t help but see that every
bit of that sweet, innocent, little girl
he had convinced to abandon her own dreams of becoming a public defender,, in
favor of making a home for him and having his child,, remained not only
intact,, but even more angelic..
he rolled his head back slowly onto his pillow and closed
his eyes.. a single glistening tear slipped slowly, painstakingly, down the
length of his cheek..
“what have i done?”
buzz demanded of himself,, as his torn, aching body convulsed in a deluge of
uncontrollable tears.. tears of sincere, painful remorse that he found himself helplessly unable to suppress..
Nice! Buzz has a heart. Is Mr. Adamawhachamacallit related to Jake Leichstinwhaever? Hey, just asking? ;)
ReplyDeleteno,, he was my 10th grade biology teacher!!! lol!!!!
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