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“That damned kid! When I see him, I'm
gonna kill him! Jumpin' out the bathroom window to get away from me.
We'll see about that!” Trudy looked ready to blow her top.
“Cut him a break. You can be pretty
scary...even to me sometimes.” Buzz tried to offer humor but a
glance at Trudy revealed it hadn't worked. She fidgeted in the seat,
red-faced, wringing her hands. Looking at her, upset Buzz. Suddenly
the temperature in the Crown Vic seemed to skyrocket. Sweat on the
back of his neck cooled the skin, but hot air still assaulted his
face.
Why in the hell did he put up with her?
It was like living with a time bomb that you knew was scheduled to
blow, but you didn't know when.
“I'm gonna kill him! I'm really gonna
kill him!”
Buzz stiffened at her words. He thought
about Adam and how he missed him...and how the boy now wanted nothing
to do him. It was a pain so deep he found it indescribable in never
having felt its full force, because he kept it in constant denial.
But it bubbled to the surface at times like this when people didn't
appreciate their own kids. Watching, he felt like killing people like
that, as if it would relieve his own feelings of torment. The ache
was uncontrollable. It was a kind of pain he didn't understand never
having experienced it totally. And he had no idea how to deal with
it. Right now, it was eating away at him like a hungry bear. The more
Trudy fussed, the worse it got.
All that, and then there was the strain
of dealing with the volatility of Trudy herself. He was so tired of
chasing after her to keep the crazed woman under control. It was like
trying to keep up with a sugar-infused two-year-old, the bratty kind
who talked back. It was taking a toll on him. And the truth be told,
he wasn't known for placating women. Far from it.
“There's the Dairy Queen! Wait until
I get my hands on him!” Her face flushed red as a tomato and her
hands clenched.
“Trudy, calm down.” He couldn't let
her near the boy in this state.
“Oh, YOU calm down. I'm sick and
tired of ya pushing me around. Everyone treats me like a goddamn
baby.”
“Maybe that's because you act like a
baby.” His fingers pounded the steering wheel as he made the turn
into the DQ parking lot. He seethed.
“Don't talk to me like that. Like you
have room to talk when it comes to having adoring children. When was
the last time Adam gave you the time of day?"
His ears sizzled hearing the remark
while his heart nose-dived deep inside to slam against that painful
spot he fought to avoid every day. He was a failure as a father, and
Trudy and everyone knew it. Worst of all, he might be no better than
her. The realization exploded and fired up like a nuclear cloud of
angst. Slamming his fist on the dash, he turned to glare at Trudy.
She reacted.
The expression on her face gave him
extreme satisfaction. Just the way he liked it before he plunged. Her
eyes were tiny, shrunken in fear, and her cheeks went pale before his
eyes. Her hands trembled.
He gave her only a split-second glance,
one to assure him the situation was ripe. He gathered the horrific
pain that had sprung up, thanks to her, and used its tremendous force
to slam his fist into Trudy's face. She earned it.
At first, she was motionless as though
in shock. She raised a shaky hand to catch blood dripping from her
nose as a red fist mark formed on the side of her face. She looked at
him like a hurt puppy, then jerked and reached for the door handle,
bolting from the car.
He looked at her in dismay, regretting
his loss of control, pumping his fist in the other hand, trying to
put together the pieces of what he'd done. That was when he spotted
Elliot in the restaurant doorway. He was standing with two strange
men in religious clothes.
She followed his gaze to see, too. And
then Trudy started again. Coming out of her daze, she started
screaming. At first it was a howl, like a wild animal. But then, the
words became clearer, punctuated by arms waving and foot stomping. A
typical Trudy tantrum.
“Buzz Miller, I hope you drop dead. I
never want to see you again. EVER.”
Seeing Elliot, so like his Adam,
emotions zigzagged and juxtaposed in his head like a kaleidoscope
gone wild. He didn't know what to respond to first. And then, he
knew. The overwhelming emotion eating at him was shame, with defeat
racing into second place. He'd slammed Trudy, failed to control his
anger again. It was hopeless. A dark cloud moved in and smothered
him...then propelled him with bolts of anxiety. He had to get away,
from Trudy, his job, everything. He got out of the car and slammed
the door. Trudy was still at it, screaming. When he got out, she
headed his way. But he would have none of it. He made his way to the edge
of the highway and picked his way across, dodging cars. His eyes were
full of tears. Once when a car came close, he reached for his gun,
realizing he was no longer allowed to carry a gun. He made it to the
other side and disappeared in a woodsy area along the road.
“Hmmph, he walked off.” Trudy stood
with hands on hips, puzzling with the problem. Then she remembered
Elly and turned on her heel to look toward the Dairy Queen. But
Elliot was no longer in the doorway.
* * *
“Thanks for letting me stay with
you,” Elliot said.
“Well, if that crazy woman was your
mother, it's better you stick with us,” Jacob said. “Now where
does your father live? We'll get you home.”
whoa!!! mega meltdown!!!! excellent write!!! so many possible directions to go from here!!!!!!
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